How to give critique for drawabox lesson one

Feel free to copy and paste the below. I recommend you use grammarly or Microsoft Word as you write your critique. You do not have to use the below to give critique. Feel free to edit it to your choosing. I made this page to encourage drawabox.com community members to give free community critique. Giving critique helped me learn and I am sure it can help you learn drawing. Mention Elodins pastebin: https://pastebin.com/dYnFt9PQ